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Post by non-sequitur aeon on Apr 15, 2008 19:37:18 GMT -5
how many worlds in surrender occult vanquish me, i wonder, as result relinquish me, and i, you soothing are the immortal words my pen brings fruition this world too, has seen me last and i, it -meek
surreal sound of celestial hymn voices non-corporeal move me to thee where are you, where must one begin again anew it speaks as if a friend to thee towards me i will find you my esper, my love -meek
watch as the world pass seek as the lies fall wield but the truth and weep as the voice call -meek
what depths this repose may bring what troubles my thoughts relay i acquiesce though am still assunder may such light never extinguish an auriel, but unto whom they will not see me luminescent only my course shell
my flesh, my nature betrays the self esoteric, remain in ether
raw and meek, i wait in dismay pray or prey, we stay the seekers mentor me, or i be lost in the waves and masses suffer me to know who is still to live -meek
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scars
Dark Angel
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Post by scars on Apr 22, 2008 17:49:20 GMT -5
I really liked them.
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shadewing
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I'd rather ride in Hell than serve in Heaven.
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Post by shadewing on Apr 22, 2008 21:39:21 GMT -5
Not bad *claps*
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acal
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I will rule the world after I finish updating my bloggs. :P
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Post by acal on Apr 30, 2008 22:58:42 GMT -5
I don't see what you mean by crappy. It's not like mine. (Though to be fair to myself I have not written anything in years.)
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acal
New Member
I will rule the world after I finish updating my bloggs. :P
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Post by acal on Apr 30, 2008 23:01:11 GMT -5
Oh creature hidden in shadow. Why should you creep when all others sleep? Rise now and join your brothers and take your place in the ranks of those who are feared!
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Post by non-sequitur aeon on May 1, 2008 21:45:04 GMT -5
sight behold us this withered ideal, an esper amongst the ranks reveal
:-P
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acal
New Member
I will rule the world after I finish updating my bloggs. :P
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Post by acal on May 2, 2008 1:22:55 GMT -5
Well aren't you dramatic. And I thought my people were the one's known for drama. lol.
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