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a poem
Sept 24, 2007 23:10:18 GMT -5
Post by non-sequitur aeon on Sept 24, 2007 23:10:18 GMT -5
i don't typically write and have never posted poetry, but i'm figuring i'll share this one...there's no title and it's written in a 'narrorative' 1st person
upon what times have i been placed within what wails does my flesh fester grace within me evanescent such fall i contemplate in jest the jest, albeit irony farm from gold, as it were granted wish in fire; transmutation, in hope ascension, i desire
feelings assunder, tempestuous thoughts received i realize; no, believe never has the foundation been hope rather, it is the ground in which it lies my eyes translucent counterpart to my matted abode shine they bright, i sigh as it were
my perceived course, i juxtapose my perceptual source, dichotomy sewn are the same as it were
omnidistant from the world, i feel angeli glorioso, i appeal zealous attemps to ascertain nirvana, hindered, from this dormain esperum, i cry as it were
my eyes show, yet never find lumines divine, yet unrefine shine in vespertine suture, my love
within what casings have i dwell methinks, and accepts, without prevail a silence cool as hell's ninth sphere a golden truth frozen, within solid leer apart of myself, i can see though never show part of myself winged, esoteric glow
and whosoever may see such form has shown said love, and may adorn a golden sphere
distance deceives, i've always been here with you goddess one may begin, anew in jest i cry; as it were
-meek
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a poem
Sept 24, 2007 23:42:45 GMT -5
Post by non-sequitur aeon on Sept 24, 2007 23:42:45 GMT -5
lol, the 6th line is supposed to be far* from gold
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a poem
Sept 28, 2007 2:56:43 GMT -5
Post by redeemer143 on Sept 28, 2007 2:56:43 GMT -5
I love it. It sounds to me very much like Milton. Or Dante.
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a poem
Oct 1, 2007 9:10:21 GMT -5
Post by non-sequitur aeon on Oct 1, 2007 9:10:21 GMT -5
Thank you
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a poem
Oct 1, 2007 19:02:30 GMT -5
Post by redeemer143 on Oct 1, 2007 19:02:30 GMT -5
you're welcome! ^_^
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